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by Anonymous

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by Amyfriend02/01/07

"Passionate moans.."

and a whimper of pleasure....oh my. Here comes the big 'O'.

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by saucymh11/23/14

Perfect imagery

Carefully worded, a concise poem. I particularly like the passive helplessness of 'carries me out with the tide'. Beautiful

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