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by Anonymous

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by Maria239402/14/05

delightful!

and the best line was "jittery dandelion prey" just a lovely piece champagne, enjoyed very much..thanks for making me smile :)

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by Anonymous02/14/05

An idyllic flow

Love the way this one trickles like a sparkling brook-- a gorgeous poem, champ!

Flyguy

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by duckiesmut02/14/05

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Your poem has been mentioned in Monday's New Poems Reviews.

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by sandspike02/14/05

I guess a fey wind

does blow a diferent way. Smooth little work I enjoyed
reading.

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by My Erotic Tale02/14/05

Kitty

I have a black cat named shadow ...everything is prey!
this was a very good poem and I can relate.

Witty word wizard poem~

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by Anonymous02/15/05

beautiful

lovely diction, nice imagery. thanks...

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by Tzara09/30/06

Touched my soul.

Your writing is so beautiful! More, please!

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by Maria239410/01/06

well, heck

I really DO love you work, Champagne. I enjoy your assonance and your alliteration, I truly enjoy your wit, which sometimes seems so hidden, yet really never is...hidden, that is.


xoxox

m

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by LeBroz01/25/07

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The perfect mood piece to break the mood of a frigidly cold Winter day.

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by LeBroz03/27/07

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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.



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by tazz31709/05/12

KEEPING IN STRIDE

with things narrow and wide, TK U MLJ LV NV

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