by Jack Gates
You rushed through this story. There should be a bit more build up. I know what it is like. You want to get to the sex right away. Have some fun and enjoy the build up. Believe me you'll be that much more turned on.
Sorry, but I thought this story was very badly done. Too rushed to get to the fucking with no lead in. Was our hero just drunk or did Frank slip him a "Mickey Finn?" Who were the other 2 guys who suddenly appeared? Why did Frank do this? What the hell is C.V.??? Even the author left us with that question. This could have been a really hot J/O story instead of a waste of time.