All Comments on 'Franks Gift of an Asset for my C.V.'

by Jack Gates

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
A bit too rushed

You rushed through this story. There should be a bit more build up. I know what it is like. You want to get to the sex right away. Have some fun and enjoy the build up. Believe me you'll be that much more turned on.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Very shoddy work!

Sorry, but I thought this story was very badly done. Too rushed to get to the fucking with no lead in. Was our hero just drunk or did Frank slip him a "Mickey Finn?" Who were the other 2 guys who suddenly appeared? Why did Frank do this? What the hell is C.V.??? Even the author left us with that question. This could have been a really hot J/O story instead of a waste of time.

zazrix9zazrix9over 5 years ago
Lucky

wish it could be me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

ХРЕНАТЕНЬ "ниже плинтуса"!

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