All Comments on 'Michelle's Story'

A truly lovely story. I love happy endings and bad guys getting what they deserve.

A true love story in the purest form. A story so spitrual that it makes us wonder about the gifts God has bestowed upon us. A touching masterpiece that inspires to the soul.

An inspirational story of faith, questioning our actions, and fighting for what we value most. Loved it!

please do a chapter on how he fixed his hands and

married michelle

Exceptionally poignant and well-written without being overly sentimental. My music was left behind long ago but not a day goes by that I don't miss it. You made me cry. Thank you for your gift.

Not read one from this section before - and there were almost tears in my eyes. Wow. Well done.

BRAVO!!!

That I have read... congratulations!!

Honest, raw, yet loving. Flawed characters, vengence and it's ramifications and lack of freedom from pain, freedom only coming in love.

Loved the raw emotion in this story.

Bravo, encore!

This story was awesome, you're a really great writer. I can't wait to read more of your stories.

Totally brilliant. As a writer I stand in awe of your work

That was amazing. Beautiful... Well written. :)

What can I say that you, more than likely, haven't heard before? This was an amazing story. Extremely well written, packed with emotion. And of course, I can't help but empathize with Miguel... I, too, play guitar, and though I didn't experience what he did, my own guitar playing has been curtailed because of rheumatoid arthritis, causing me to feel as if I have been robbed of a wonderful gift. But back to you! :-) Excellent story. Excellent writer. Looking forward to reading your other postings.

I am a white man, raised christian, with a hatred of the Catholic church and some distain for the hispanic peoples.

And I cried.

I really liked "Bus Story," the first of your stories I read, but this one is simply stunning. It would stand as a strong short story without the sex, and with, it is nothing less than a joy to read (through tears at the end). I very much look forward to reading more of your work - please keep posting! Cheers, ktr.

There are no words.

No words.

Thank you.

I have read a lot of these stories on this site But this was outstanding. Good characters; good english; and no spelling goofs.

I must read more of this author's work

YOU PULLED ME IN WITH THE STORY AND KEPT ME THERE WITH THE DELICATE WRITING. TO BE ABLE TO BEGIN WITH SEX AND END WITH MEANING IS EXCEPTIONAL. YOUR STYLE KEEPS YOU ON THE EDGE BETWEEN DRIPPY SENTIMENT AND REAL DISCLOSURE OF SELF. THERE ARE FEW WRITERS WHO CAN DO IT AT ALL. I WISH YOU SUCCESS AND LONGER STORIES.

Thanks for your passionate tale and for embracing the muse.

I really liked this story! It was very sweet and touching! Great Job!

That was one of the best stories i've read, you have a gift. Keep up the good work

Beautiful story!! One of the best I have ever read.

I loved it. Couldn't be better.

Very nicely written - not verbose, great wordsmithy to convey the emotional impact.

Love the twist : the title says one thing but the story is from Miguel's point of view. You have to imagine why it is truly Michelle's story and all the unsaid things Michelle does. This self-discovery of Michelle's side of the story makes it extremely memorable. And then it cascades into yet another emotional impact..

Simply wonderful twist!!

Every time i read it, find some more and deep meaning.

truly A Masterpiece.

100 operations will NOT restore damaged nerves. The guitar was his gift NOT his voice. Great voices are a dime a dozen. I can't stand to hear ANY of whitney houstons songs, but I love Celene Dion so it's ALL in the eye or taste of the beholder. latinos RARELY move me, but that's just me. what ever rocks your boat is fine by me. we are all different and zero better than anyone else.....

all of the action, events, critical points, tragedy, and successes are about, happen to, and done by Miguel. why is it called Michelle's Story?

Beautiful! Thank you. jntiques

Laughed when I read your comment.

Wow what a great story.

I was touched by the passion for music.

And the eventual love.

Thank you, I enjoyed it very much.

This one stirs the blood; the anger at the crime (strange how there was no formal reprisal) was damned good. I liked the translations, which made it work nicely.

Thank you

HP

Do things like these really happen? I mean the NOT GUILTY part just because there was a game. Does it happen in real life? If so, then I pray those victims get some kind of justice in some other way. It's a pity we let sports take so much importance that even someone's life doesn't seem to matter.

The story was amazing. but did Miguel play his guitar at the performances or just sing?

Wow, what a story! I can’t believe the comments were from two years ago to 16 years ago. Regrettably, history did somewhat repeat the story, at least on the surface of the news headlines. I loved that this had a positive ending.

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