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by Anonymous

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by 02/17/05

Wow

I like this Art. The line breaks enhance the feel of the poem, kind of disjointed, but surprisingly surreal. Thanks :)

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by Anonymous02/18/05

Tell me what you want

what you really really want..

Guess you did. :) This was very nice. Clever and well balanced poem.

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by Anonymous02/18/05

Surrealism of living...

A clever honest moment.. Art when I read this the works of S. Dali flew into my mind.. the layers of a human essence laid out in a dream world state while living in a moment of earthly reality...
nice work my friend..
Du~

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by lindiana02/20/05

Very hot

very wow...thank you!

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