This was actually kind of a cute story. I'm not sure why, but that's the word that comes to mind. I like it, I hope you think about doing more with it, and maybe putting a bit more imagery into the sex scene. Good job, I'll be checking on it:P
this was a great little quickie
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Hm?>/< interesting...
This was actually kind of a cute story. I'm not sure why, but that's the word that comes to mind. I like it, I hope you think about doing more with it, and maybe putting a bit more imagery into the sex scene. Good job, I'll be checking on it:P
this was a great little quickie
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