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Cute tale.
I liked your story; cute tale and well composed.
A good start to a story
I found the story interesting but there just wasn't enough to it. Perhaps going back over it and adding some more to it will help, as well as adding to the sex scene, there really wasn't much there.
Confused...
I am amazed, and perplexed, that this counts as an illustrated story.
What happened?
Started strong but ran out of steam. You can obviously write but I think this could've been longer & stronger. Not sure a cartoon cherry counts much towards illustration babe
good point
Spot on @LindsayRae
I checked out the illustrations category hoping to see some pics
Work on the illustrations or photos and more people will read your story. Since it's the illustrations section people tend to go into it expecting some great visual stimulation.
Um okay
Make it longer!!! I want more action!
eating pie :-))
Most of the memories I use when I masturbate are pussy eating. When a lady first opens her thighs the view and musk are irresistible. Then I know she is mine to use. I can spend an entire afternoon eating out hot pussy. The fact that Kentucky was the setting didn't hurt either. My mother was a Kentucky girl and I've had my share of KY pussy. I was born in Indianapolis but it seemed that half the population was Kentuckian. Mom was from Jamestown, south of Lexington. Nice erection for my start of reading erotica and I have you to thank :-)) I'll throw in kisses placed around your own vulva. xxx's
paint?
I'm glad to see that paint is still being used
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