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lovely
mentioned in Wednesday poetry review. Thanks
love it
If I was going to tanka a toy I would of gone with this
subject matter. I don't know that I could of pulled it off
this well. 'flatboat rides upside down' is that a reflection I'm seeing? I've been at this inlet many times.
ride a wave
riding waves and throwing lines
your poem was very fine~ Art~
Nice view!
This was serene. Enjoyed, thank you.
I'm not familiat with the Tanka form
But this very precise, and still inventive kind of descriptive poetry feels very...well...japanese. Beautifully painted. Especially the last line.
blue...
I really loved this.. flatboat upside down... twists the mind of the reader... serene reading then FLIP.. thank you for introducing this form... now I want to learn more.. love it as usual your writing inspires
Du Lac~
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