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Simple and beautiful
I loved it from the first line to the last, elegantly written and beautifully put!
good read
Nice little poem that flows well and gets the job done.
It could be a little tighter.
Sweet.
It's simple, yet, succeeds in conveying the deepest meaning of one's love for another.
excellent poem
wow a very well written poem
and endearing, very nice~
Nice poem (like you)
Although I am really fond of your exotic poetry, this was still great, Jennifer. Now I'm home again I must read your stories and poems over again.
From Under the Bridge
Jennifer C:
I only wish some of the other "poets" wrote like you. Thanks for a very much enjoyed work.
Well Done
Enjoyed the rhythm; it better evokes the pleasure of being enveloped by love than a harder-edged verse speaking of the exhiliraton of raw passion.
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