All Comments on 'Camping'

You set the stage beautifully. Please expand the sex side of the story...

Just the type of story I love to read. I wish it had been longer. More of the guys getting it on. I wish they had a [ BI ] section for stories. The story was very good and enjoyable. MORE PLEASE

Great story, Don't you love it whan adults have fun? I personally like a bit more detail in the sex scenes, butstill I liked it. maybe you can find a part 2?

then it turned into a 50%

Loved it!

In the beginning of the story Peggy is described as having an "ample body"-- by the end, she is small-breasted with a "slim waist".

I can only come up with three options: she lost a LOT of weight during the day, or OzRobert didn't remember what he'd written at the top of the page, or he doesn't know what 'ample' means. In any case, it distracted from the story.