All Comments on 'Charlie's Angels'

YOUR STORIES ARE UPLIFTING AND FUNNY.THANKS FOR THE JOY.

I usually detest stories where a father in law is fucking his daughter in law. You, as a writer presented the characters well and changed my mind about this story almost in the first half of the first part.

Sounds like 3/4 of Vharlie's boys were not raised to well or their good raising didn't rub off.

I guess a second chapter where all four of the boy's wives were being buggered by old Charlie would not be realistic at all. lol

Old Charlie and his angels could start him another family and by the time the kids got out of high school, he could have gotten a pass from an old folks home to attend graduation ceremonies, lol

Good story, good writing, some mistakes in spelling, some in grammar but overall a very good write.

Gary

this has got to be the best i have ever read in the two years of reading stories from here. kudo's on your exceptional writing skills. i hope to be one of your many fans here.

A well written story even without the sex. Believable, with good character development.

Thanks!

You must have worked awfully hard to be able to meld all of the people into the story so that it flowed and made sense.

One helluva great story!! I couldn't stop reading it!! You really did very wel with the whole story!

... sorry that I can only vote it a 5. You said, 'the beginning'..... hope you are already at work on the next episode!

Lukas

I agree completely with all the other comments.The story is well told ,and the characters are beleivable.I just hope that our hero does not run out of stamina,remember tha though the spirit is willing the flesh may be weak!!!

Top marks for this story! Nicely developed characters and a very loving atmosphere made this story an excellent read.

Thanks!

Loved the story. It's very well written and doesn't go over the edge to vulgarity. Thanks for a great story! Hope there's more.

I honestly loved this story, and perhaps someday there'll be an end to wife beating and other abuse. Folks, it's time that the human race grew up and began behaving responsibily...the same kind of loving responsibility that Charlie shows in this story.

i agree with you,we need to grow up and respect others and stop abuse of any kind.good job with this story.

Please continue this story

The protagonist is 40 and had multiple children and grandchildren? Come on, dude. Tighten that sloppiness up.

I absolutely love the story. AAAA++++

To anonymous, at 40 I had a family of 6 children 4 girls and 2 boys and my eldest daughter had 2 children, therefore this is not beyond the realms of possibility.

A great story that is not beyond the bounds of probability as I have previously commented, an enjoyable read and a feasible plotline, being from the eastern side of the Atlantic it took a few paragraphs to accept the alternative spellings that appeared occasionally.