love to read more!
Wow!!!what a set of rules to follow. Look like the things that will make her vomit may be the thing that really turn her on.
I don't vote because of the trolls and goblins. This should be a very sexy series. This story was very arousing. I can't wait for the rest. Keep writing.
a bit too fast but great story nonetheless - five stars
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Excellent Start
love to read more!
This has got to be good
Wow!!!what a set of rules to follow. Look like the things that will make her vomit may be the thing that really turn her on.
A Hot, Great Beginning
I don't vote because of the trolls and goblins. This should be a very sexy series. This story was very arousing. I can't wait for the rest. Keep writing.
great story
a bit too fast but great story nonetheless - five stars
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