I like the way you took your time to tell the story and not to rush it. It was a story where problems abound and yet they were finally resolved. Above all it was HOT and Sensuous. I'm a sucker for happy endings.
This old man can readily see that Al died in rehab and has entered heaven and doesn't know it. Unfortunately in real life, the fucking women would go to fighting each other like cats and dogs. lol Thanks for writing a really hot and erotic story. I loved it. Gary
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A Really Hot Story
I like the way you took your time to tell the story and not to rush it. It was a story where problems abound and yet they were finally resolved. Above all it was HOT and Sensuous. I'm a sucker for happy endings.
Heaven
This old man can readily see that Al died in rehab and has entered heaven and doesn't know it.
Unfortunately in real life, the fucking women would go to fighting each other like cats and dogs. lol
Thanks for writing a really hot and erotic story. I loved it.
Gary
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