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Nice start
Nice start. Just waiting for the fucking to start. Are you sure you aren't a professional writer? Keep them coming.
Good introduction.
A very nice start. I quite liked Poker Loser and was glad you decided to continue the adventures of Allison.
she needs
why not revenge on todd ... cut off his dick ... get him under her control and do to him what he did to her ... just before she makes a unuch of him and gets her self respect back..i know you can write so show it
Great Start!
I really enjoyed this story, I am eagerly anticipating the next installment.
great job
this story was a great sequal to the poker loser and im very intersted in finding out if you bring todd back into the story!
great story...
Alliaon is a great topic for your story and she plays her part well. I am sorry I didn't comment of the Poker Loser chapters, because all of the were great and for you to continue these stories are a Godsend. Thank you Goldeniangel
great story...
Alliaon is a great topic for your story and she plays her part well. I am sorry I didn't comment of the Poker Loser chapters, because all of the were great and for you to continue these stories are a Godsend. Thank you Goldeniangel
allison saga .....
Allison saga continue to excite me. Author all of your series on Allison are among the best I have read so far. Since so much is base on her life with Todd, I think how so many men still women over the years and as a woman, has those same feeling. This similiar when a virgin is broken in by her first lover. Good or bad she will always remember it.
Nice girls finish last...
This is the first story I've read that was written by Goldeiangel. I don't know how her other stories have slipped my attention. :-( I will start a reading frenzy this evening. :-)
Allison makes an interesting character. I need to know more about her and her previous relationship with Todd and also why that relationship ended (or did it?)
Golden has done a good job of laying out the beginning of a long story, it has so many possibilities of where the story line could go.
Keep up the good work...
great short start
I like her feelings, how her wants are at odds with her needs...the descriptions are good. Be careful in describing two scenes at once, they get confusing unless you keep the reader lined out with which part you are talking about. I like it. Want to read the rest.
So Hot!
I would really like to see her call Todd back up!
Love it
Best series of my fuckin life!!!!
Great story!!!
Golden, first, thank you for telling them the way it is!!! Some of the comments are off the wall. I don't know about you, but I can't even tolerate looking at them anymore. You are an amazing writer and you should be very proud. :) As I commented in the previous series, do what I love to do...smile and wave when the flip you off. ;)
I don't need to say "keep up the good work", you haven't disappointed yet. THANK YOU!! :D By the way, you have been getting 5 stars from me and I can't see that ending anytime soon!!
A teasing start
Thanks, got me right in the mood for reading the next part, the hallmark of a good story. I like the way your mind works and am looking forward to the series!
LucyCanyon
Very promising start
Just read this as the first story written by you and will definitely continue. Very fluent writing that immediately awakened the wish to meet this woman and help her getting what she obviously craves. Got my anticipation up just right^^
very hot
cant wait for no 2, hopefully its longer
amazing writer!
I have read nearly all of your stories since I fist came on this site about two months ago. I started with "Taken By The Wolf". I'm a varacious reader (not just erotic stories) and I think you are and amazingly talented writer. There will always be people ready to badmouth you but pay them no mind they are unhappy in their live and jealous of your talent. I've never left a comment for anyone on any site before but after your invitation for feedback and call out to the a**holes that criticize I felt I needed to let you know that your writing is fantastic.
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