Alpha & Omega

cute

well, that would be a rather intense first date!

Well done

very well done,as usual!!

Wow

Isn't that a really nice way to overcome somebodys shyness. A truely amazing story. Thank you!

Interesting.

The ongoing initiation really kept my interest in finding out what the unsuspecting couple's next challenge would be. It's a rather original way to get two timid people to know each other better. Perhaps I should join that club. LOL!

Very nice story

It did make me wonder though. If his sister had went through the same thing, why didn't she have at least a best male friend? I don't think you could go through something like this without bonding to that person in some way. This was one of the most original stories that I have seen on this site in a while.
Thank you for your effort in writing this story.

perfect

a Perfect Story

loved it

I'd like to see another chapter from this story, do they stay together through school, and after?

A Smile for Cat

What a wonderful combination of eroticism and good feeling. This was a story that had me smiling all the way through - the kind of smile such as when you watch your little brother learning to ride a two wheeler while remembering your own experience of that and knowing that he will succeed. Thank you.

suggestion for the next chapter

And I hope there is a next chapter. Move on in John and Mary's relationship. Would be a nice touch if their siblings were partners on thir hell day.

One of the best

I really enjoyed the story, it is erotic, romatic and funny.
Please continue. You are one of my favourate authors

Thank you !!!

deeply unselltling

A chillinh Halloween Appropriaste story. Thanks for writing

Wow!

Loved this story. Very creative and the characters are very likable.

No way

Sorry.. Way of the sheep's or?? What a fuc*d up story.. Humiliation and submission.. This is a BSDm story for those who can't get it up otherwise..In which way this is a romance I don't know.. Would it have been up to me those people planning this would have been punished severely.. Ugliness and sadness hidden behind some strange ideas of social competence..Cheers Yoron

Have To Agree With The Last Post Below....

This was nothing short of a 'Bondage / Discipline' tale set as a fraternity initiation. It was also was a case of mental rape (no I'm not kidding.) Just because the 'outcome' of this Pavlovian exercise seemed somewhat positive, in no way excuses the perpetrators from the crimes they committed on the two ‘lab rats’. Shyness, at its core, is the expression of ‘the fear of rejection’. In this case, your protagonist should have run for the hills, because ‘the cure’ set him up for MAJOR head case problems down the road. (Just wait until his ‘Stockholm Syndrome’ abates.) Your boy in this tale only made one mistake, he trusted his Sister! Will he trust any family member again? Doubtful. My only question here would be, how long will it take your hero to realize exactly what has been done to him and who is culpable? After all, if you can portray this ‘rape’ as helping out a loved one, surely you can write a tale about how your boy can reciprocate in kind. If I were any of the responsible people in your tale, I’d be terrified to be anywhere near this little ‘ticking time bomb’. Regards, “Notes-R-Us”

Fantastic Tale

Let certain people say what they want, I thought it was a great story. The two main characters fell in love while going through a difficult set of circumstances that they VOLUNTEERED themselves to be in; and that was the whole point. Keep up the good work.

Brilliant

You wright a great story. WELL DONE

Just a shit of a mind excrement.

Inept and talentless. 1*.

Even though the story is VERY flawed I still liked it because such a situation can actually begin the flickers of love. 3 stars.

Only 5 stars for this incredible gem

The story is brilliant the author's genius organized each scene in 3D that left little to speculation. The principal characters were subjected to a grueling set of initation events that were definitely erotic but outlined a great way to combat shyness. Personally, I was plagued with this characteristic so I can relate to the story very well. Mary and John related well in the end and like this authorized other stories that I read I wanted to see it go on and on and on.

Bloody hell !

Remind me never to go within a bulls roar of such an undisciplined place as your, I hope, fictional college.
The writing was good but the suppositions were disgusting.
How could anyone have the slightest respect for such a Nazi like organisation.

I wish

ohh... How much I wish I was the hero of this story. Not half as shy however never had a gf for sure.... Lolz....
Loved the story. Thanks :)

Wish I'd gone to this college!

Nope not shy and not the prettiest either, but there was this cute guy, as shy as they come, who wouldn't even look at me directly. But I would have loved to be Mary to his John. I tried a few times and even paired up for a lab class with him, but to no avail.

Met him after ages when we both switched to the same organisation. He was now confident enough to come over and chat. But damn he was already engaged! I half jokingly chided him that he never gave me a chance.
And guess what he said....

I know I know...
Sigh...

Wonderful story & well written. Maybe that would have gotten me a girl in school.
Ed Grocott
edgrocott@gmail.com

If only...sigh

So many shy people could use this treatment. Only those that have not been shy in some way could be critical of anyone learning about sex and love like this. Most of us that grew up in the 40s-50s-60s did not!!! We had sexual inhibitions that ruined us in one way or another.

Wonderful story - Cat5

Excellent story! Thank you again. Jntiques

Damn

Damn that was fun to read. Thank you

I always wondered what the appeal of Greek life is?

Had I only known!!! :+))

Is there a post-grad option? :+))