All Comments on 'It Started in the Rain Ch. 02'

The story got hotter then hell. You sir are a master of slowly and thoroughly constructing an erotic and sensuous tale. I will wait most impatiently for part 3.

Once again great story, made my dick so hard. Looking forward to the next one. Ethan

both in this chapter and in chapter 1. Stories with heart and hot sex are the best, and you have done a great job with both in your story.

Better than the first one, make certain

that no. 3 appears soon.

When I fantasize about not one, but two young women in my bed, reality kicks in and I always hope that they will like each other as well as they like me. We all have to sleep sometime. You only touched on that briefly, but the feeling is there, and what is left unsaid but understood is what makes you so very good.

So loving and extremely sexy descriptions and a great easy flow makes this a top quality story for me. I look foreward to chapter 3 appearing, hopefully ASAP! <grin>

I am enjoying the trip - again -

a game of menageries. TK U MLJ LV NV

0 Stars. Total creepy sicko pervert.

Great story of people who live instead of just existing.

Boundary-less ass jack. If your that hot and getting all that sex, slamming the step-d?

Major League loser.

Gotta love a woman who's not afraid to share! One of my personal favorite fantasies is a FFM threesome. I always try to attend to the woman I'm with needs and desires. I look forward to reading more. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.