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Hot and Cold

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/20/05

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I enjoyed the suspense of this work.. although we all know what is being said.. that worry and pain of saying the first "L" word is captured in this moment..
ty for the read
Du~

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by Bridget6902/21/05

Love fever.

Realistically conveys the feelings of nervousness and physical trepidation which comes with the first declaration of love.

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