by sissysubTiffany
It's been a good trilogy but as for me piss scene was a lit extra. Keep going.
I really thought about leaving out the piss scene at the end, but this is all based on real life events that happened as described so I put in in to be true to what happened.
I truly loved your story, it's the first one i'm reading from you, but will definitely check out more of them after this. I liked every word of it
Loved your story, and I liked the piss scene. However, I do prefer a story where the Dom is loving in some way.