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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/20/05

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Powerful images here.. pulling me right in and becoming one with the work..
ty for the read
Du~
your poem is mentioned on the Sunday reviews

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by Anonymous02/21/05

~ dreamer

It's a slow burn, but those are the ones remembered ;)

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by moonbladem02/23/05

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Hey Dreamer! (*_~)

This flows very nicely, almost languidly, even with the description of the storm. The voice is like a soft windchime, and I can hear it breathe in the wind. Beautiful work. :)

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