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by twelveoone02/20/05

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first 8 lines, overdone, audience losers
last 3, good

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by KOLKORE06/19/08

Old news reels...and new dogmas on the screen

Old newsreels from the 30's and the 40's gave me blood chilling reminders of terrifying screamers of Dogmas. I open the screen at home and visit more screamers of bloodthirsty believers in ultimate one truth (and death to the rest) I envy the lives of those who believe that those images (including the under stated poem) are an over reach...

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