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Long as hell but worth the read!
Ached in this moment:
Was it hateful providence that
let one little saline bastard
fall from your eye,
into mine?
It's trite,
but I'll hold it close,
long and longer
the length of the poem symbolizes to me.. not forever for although it takes a considerable amount of time.. and is filled with great emotion and visuals like love making.. it does end..
stellar work DA
Du~
anyway
nice poem~
Bitter sweet
is the pill, but we take it, anyway.
Nice work, D.A.
Ouch!
This poem caroms around the room in a drunken stagger, D.A. It very well captures the sentiment you describe, and leaves the reader reeling and breathless. Well done.
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A long piece about
True love in passing;
A transient thing that may appear
Tomorrow or
Next year.
Enjoyable.
The return is sweet ~ the parting always regretful. Lovely poem.
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