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give up man
if you ever thought you could write ... think again ... it just keeps getting more sorry all the time ... PLEASE give it up
Very well-written
I've just started reading Allison's stories of late, and I've been really impressed by your style, Goldi. Despite what some other reader is saying, your one of the better writers on literotica. Keep it up.
Can't wait for Alison and Diana to get involved, btw.
don't listen to the critics
Whoever told you to give up is a spineless SOB that probably couldn't write a lick if their life depended on it. You have definite flair and style. Your stories have substance beyond simply suck and fuck, which probably is what annoyed that previous commentor. Please, keep up the good work.
awesome ending
Where do you come up with such great stories? This was an awesome read.
With understanding
Allison, even when not fully satisfied, is awesome. She is the ideal mate. Even better, she seems to be understanding herself more and more.
Goldie, your writing is terrific.
Wow
I like this story! Allison is very, very hot. Bring more! Haha
love it
mmm, love it love it love it, again!
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