Truth or Dare

Sweet Story

Sweet, sexy story. You make the reader root for your characters.

Woulda, Coulda, Shoulda

Great story, with great characters...

If I knew then what I know now, I woulda, coulda, shoulda had a whole lot more fun!!

Wow!

That was freaking adorable!!
If first times could be like that for everyone!

ADORABLE!!

Good Job Babe...

well done great set of character's and a totally beleivable plot! ;)

Kisses,
T

Soo GReat

That has to be the sexiest sweetest most true to life expeirence with a lot less of the fumbling i have ever read that had em thought just thinking of being Dana

Really lovely

If my first time had been like this... well... it just would have been better.

I loved it. And as normal,... it leaves space to be continued.

Brill job...

Amba.. the london girl...

aww

Damn, I wish that could have been what happened to me. Damn.

Awesome story line

Still a virgin here and damn do I wish my first time will b like that. Awesome story line.

wow

oh fuck it is so awesome...

damnnnn

I wish my first time was like that !! ><
This story is so hot. ;)

Romantic. Cute. Hot. Honest. All in one. A passionate story!
Good work.

you should totally make this a series.

continue please!!

Make a second chapter or more!!

Very nice

Very nice story of two people discovering lovemaking and them selfs and the boy being gentle and understanding for her first time.

Thanks

Thanks for such a loving, gentle and caring love story of two young people. Very nice for a change of pace over some of the other stories around. Well written!

Tears!

Aww that was absolutely sweet. I had some little baby tears on the end