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Toy Time

byGoldeniangel©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/22/05

Toy Time 2?

Sounds like there's room for a future story where the wife gets her turn to Playon her Birthday!

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by Anonymous03/01/05

Hot Hot Hot

If only it could be illustrated... I came twice just reading it!

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by Anonymous03/12/05

Oh God!

Someone please do that to my pussy!! Please?

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by Anonymous03/23/05

wow

wow i would give anything to experiance that with my fella

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by Anonymous12/08/05

Le sigh...

Some freaks are too horny and mindless to think about some things that aren't good about the story. Yes, it was a fairly good story, if not a little..unrealistic. Unless this actually happened, I doubt you could get the large end of a squash inside someones ass as easily as you made it seem. It's hard enough on most girls just to get a guy's penis inside there. Also, at one point, you refered to yourself/the narrator as, "He" as though you were writing in third person instead of first. A minor mistake, but you really should read your own stories over carefully. Also, the ending just bothered me with the woman screaming. Then you suddenly forgot she had passed out and had her screaming? As though she'd wake up as soon as there was more normal sex? It was an okay story, but it would've been nice if it looked like you'd taken the time to edit it a little.

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by bbwslikepussy201/30/06

hot

wow i need to buy a cucumber and a squash lol

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by DanielsCami10/16/07

wow...

Damn....that was hott...nice story

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by AmberBlack12/20/07

DAMN!

HOLY FUCK THAT WAS SO HOTT! I WANT THAT TO HAPPEN TO ME!

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by Anonymous03/11/08

I want a turn!

I would love for my husband to do that to me. The idea of an ear of corn is intriguing.....

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by killerlooks_xo06/12/08

OMG

My boyfriend can do that to me anytime!!!
Can't wait for his birthday now... i just might promise him the same thing :P

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by Anonymous11/17/08

wow

I am SO wet from this, i loved ti
wish my man would do that toi me lol

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by Anonymous02/27/15

excellent arousal story!

great imagination. I enjoyed this story immensely.

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