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that pretty much
sums up why one lives to retire and move to the water...nothing compares to drifting with the waves..sunshine fresh air and your dreams...awesome ss..blue
the last
stanza nearly ruined it for me. You said everything so perfectly in the preceding lines, the last one changed up and it almost seemed harsh compared to the rest. but i did love the poem besides that one little thing :)
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pure sandspike-- if you figure this out let me know. think I prefer the mountains though
well done, ss!
as
classic sandspike...
This is one of those poems you read, lean back in your chair, and say "Right on."
Nice one, enjoyed!
That's the life!
If only we could lead such carefree existences.
Sitting on the dock of the bay
There are people you can't separate from a force of nature and it is impossible to think of you, Sandy, without the water. I see you're keeping well and dreaming of summer waves, as am I.
See you on the shore.
bet your sweet ass ...
I loved your poem,
it had a sunny at the beach style smile to it
8 knots
Paradise
is floating away on the salty breeze your words created.
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