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by Ronnie 194601/07/07

Disappointing illustration

Whilst I was disappointed with the illustration (confetti?)
I loved your story, incest always turns me on. Well wriiten with just enough erotic suspense. I enjoyed it.

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by Anonymous02/23/10

Seriously?!?!?!

By putting this in illustrated with that pathetic of an excuse as 'illustration', it came across more like you were trying to sneak an incest story into a category it shouldn't have been in. I enjoy incest stories, and while brief and predictable, enjoyed this story. But by trying to place it in illustrated with that?!?!?! Sorry, you lost me.

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