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Going Home With a Smile on My Face

byBill Dada©
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by LuciousBi-Writes4U07/18/05

.....you

come up with the coolest thoughts! LOL
;)
obscure but poignant!
kisses,
T

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by KOLKORE09/18/07

never coming to the same/different home

Who said you can't catch a flow? If any one can Bill Dada is the one. I actually did not find the content obscure. perhaps hard to catch in words but not obscure. It reminded me of past times when I was transitioning between work at night shift and home. The flow of thoughts at that stage seemed to be somewhat less defined compared to other times...not unlike in this poem.

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by LeBroz05/25/08

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This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 40,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.



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