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Dreams w/Everything To Go

byBill Dada©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/21/05

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okay that does it, I must read everything of yours in here

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by sweet GA peaches11/10/05

I lLOVE THIS !!!

and the title
was just the sweet
enticement...
I think I shall venture
to the cave now...

well done my friend !

-sGp-

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by logophile02/09/06

You know...

how I love all of your work, right?
This one is right up near the top for me.
Thanks for sharing this with us!

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by KOLKORE06/19/08

Teasing a (cavewoman) lady

Another mind twister. Good for fun, students of poetry and aging people who try to keep their brains in good shape (guess to which group I belong…).
It’s the right way to treat metaphors - shake them to fresh life by realizing them. Thus the stalactites from the ‘cave’ re appear as virtual earrings of the returning lady… what other visions has she brought?

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