by Cordelia Speedicut
A sexy and whimsical story that captured me from the first chapter.
The story is fast-paced and doesn't linger on insubstantial stuff, which is nice—certainly matches your pen name. However, sometimes the pace was so brisk that I had to re-read some parts to un-confuse myself. The readability has improved in the newer chapters, though, and the appendix in Ch. 7 was really helpful.
Keep up the good work...
-C