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I Totally Loved It...
From what I've seen so far, I think that you are a wonderful writer. I loved this story and I think that it has a lot of potential for future chapters. I can't wait to see what's next. And may I say, in a personal note, I especially like your choice of character name :)
Hopefully A Future Friend,
Becca :)
A great start
This was a great start. It exudes sensuality as well as sexuality. I'm on edge for the next chapter.
Great:::::
Please hurry and write more I hate to be left hanging
sucks
It sucked, i didnt get turned on. You should quit as a writer!
looks promising
Good writing and a great subject ;) can't wait to read the next chapter xxx
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