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Life Preserver Blues

byBill Dada©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/22/05

All I can say is...

... is that this poem is sad but complete. Good.

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by My Erotic Tale02/24/05

you are correct

ain't that the truth, it's about just like that.
Very witty poetry.

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by Anonymous02/24/05

a true sad goodbye...with meaning..

paints a moment of loss so fragile...and nicely placed...bluerain

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