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New Moon Pt. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/23/05

wOW

This was too hot PLEASE continue!!!!!!! i would love to see the mother surender ot her inner beast.

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by Anonymous02/23/05

Keep going . . .

This story has great potential, please keep it coming.

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by Anonymous02/25/05

EXCELLENT FIRST STORY!!!

You have scored a winner on your first try, not many people can say that. The storyline and characters are outstanding you should honestly consider turning this into a short series. Erotic Horror has such great potential yet very few good writers will try it.
Keep up the great writing!
Joel

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by dammit5101/31/07

Yeah....It's HOT.

Kudos to you, this is one wicked hot piece of erotica.

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