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by Pussymad02/22/05

Beautiful

This is a really beautiful poem about a sensual moment between two lovers. Sometimes eroticism is in what is left unsaid. Thank you.

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by Wanton Vixxxen02/22/05

You have encapsulated budding passion...

in this one phrase: " my thoughts stunned to silence... all my existence is in this kiss". A beautiful poem and a beautiful way to remember one's first kiss.

Vixxx

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by Bridget6902/23/05

Nice

Beautifully captures the essence of an anticipated first kiss.

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