by writerannabelle
A treat as always. You have a beautiful mind, Lady Annabelle, and I'm deeply grateful that you choose to share with the rest of us. <3
In previous chapters the minotaur has always been referred to as female (for example, when Tink calls it "cow bitch"), but in this chapter it's referred to as male. Which is correct? Or are there two of them?
I know writting takes time but I'm eagerly waiting for next chapter already...
Your stories are by far my favorite to read. I look every day waiting for your next post.
as always a great story and loved the tribute to harry potter with the i swear im up to no good loved it 5 stars as always
I swear that you are up to no good, thank you for another wonderful chapter. Eagerly awaiting your next installment; so until the clock chimes 13 o'clock ( what a shock! ), I wish you licks, love, and many kisses! From a fan named Mike. (S.W.A.K.)
I loved this chapter a whole lot. The stretching of the last fairy like that was the hottest thing I have read about.
As always your story building and plots are insane the only thing I dislike is how long it takes for you to create such masterful work... you need clones to help you make more
I am absolutely hooked on your stories, please, please, please keep writing!
Loving your story and can't wait for the next chapter...
Another awsome chapter. I pictured the blue fairy being used like a fleshlight! My guess is the plant stores the centuar collected will be used on the witch outside & Jenny will somehow get her body. Love this series, came for the sex stayed for the great story!
I will graciously volunteer to play Mike when this gets made into a movie. Wow, love this story so far and have forced my friends to download the lit app to read it on their phones and read it on the pc. I tip my hat to you for a wonderful story. I will be waiting for my casting call. ;)
The time between each episodes is driving me nuts. I love mythology and fantasy, and this is well written. Keep it going :)
Please don't let Dana die. I feel she would be the perfect mother to a new lineage of caretakers for the house and monsters.
Thank you for an exciting and enticing story.
I usually visit Lit to see if you have added any new chapters! Great work. You should combine some chapters into volumes and/or see if someone wants to make a separate cliff notes of the chapters for those that want to reread certain chapters (or scenes ;) )
Hope Dana and Beth make it out okay. Mike needs some human interaction in his life. I thought the clock was stolen from the storage unit and put there by someone from the society to use against Mike. It coming to her aid was a surprise.
Didn't love how tiny the fairies were since he ends up stretching one like a bater, but i can see how some would like that. I kind of expected them to grow into the size of dolls or human girls before the action started or once they started to gain energy. Not sure how much I trust them....
I'm starting to see Naia as a prisoner to her fountain. I don't see how she can be content anchored to such a small area. :(
Glad Dana and Beth are finally coming into the fold. That makes for a lot of new story possibilities.
As much as I enjoy the hotter scenes, I keep coming back for the STORY.
Your style of writting g seems to have changed or maybe it's just the story. A really interesting chapter. I really hope you get more time to write so the chapters can get longer. It's just enough to get into the mood of the story and then it finishes.
Looking forward to the next chapter
Mike was working in the house, late one night
When his eyes beheld a watery sight
A monster girl from the tub began to rise
And suddenly to Mike's surprise
She did the mash, she did the monster mash
The monster mash, it was a household smash
She did the mash, it caught on in a flash
She did the mash, she did the monster mash
From the kitchen where Tink does feast
In the master bedroom Mike dodges her teeth
Monster fix-it girl protects their abode
Loves goblin-husband; gets him to explode
They did the mash, they did the monster mash
The monster mash, it was a household smash
They did the mash, a salamander died in a flash
They did the mash, they did the monster mash
The gargoyle and banshee were having fun
The garden party had just begun
There was Dana and Jenny-possessed-Beth
While bad Sarah met her timely death
The scene was rockin', all were digging the sounds
Sweet Pea's thorny vines a makin' rustlin' sounds
More monster girls in the house abide
Helping Mike take it all in stride
They played the mash, they played the monster mash
The monster mash, it was a household smash
They played the mash, it caught on in a flash
They played the mash, they played the monster mash
Into Mike's dream, a succubus did spring
He was nearly beaten by her wild sex thing
Dreams are what you make them to Lily he said
Lily's lesson in freedom -- Kali's watershed
They played the mash, they played the monster mash
Naia dancin away, and careful, she'll splash!
They played the mash, it caught on in a flash
They played the mash, they played the monster mash
More and more girls, they appear on the scene
While Sweet Pea's tired and gone to seed
Abella and Tink with Sofia questin' alone-y
Pretty Zel showed Mike how to ride her pony
Monster girl mash -- don't do anything rash
Cecelia does wail and Abella does smash
Enemies hitting the wards with a resounding crash
Naia can drown them with her splash
It's now the mash, it's now the monster mash
The monster mash, it was household smash
It's now the mash, it caught on in a flash
It's now the mash, it's now the monster mash
Now everything's cool, monster girls sing in the band
Even monster girls need love, you understand
For you, the believing, this mash was meant too
When you get to the door, tell Mike Emily sent you
Slainté
Beth would be the best choice for bringing more care takers into mikes lineage.
This is one of the best stories I've read in a long time. Thank you.
I read several stories but follow only a few. This is definitely one of my favorites that a can't wait to read more of.
Thanks again for continuing to share your creative ideas with us.
to put down. Thanks for providing me with a very enjoyable break from the real world.
I wasn't able to put it down. Yeah, lots of stories you can just jack off to, but this is a story that you could actually fall in love with.
is mysterious, fun & sexy with a well-paced narrative and some good character development. Looking forward to it continuing. Thanks for sharing your imagination with us!
I always have a hard time waiting on the next chapter. Such great writing! I love your imagination and character developments. Oh how I would love to sit down with you one afternoon! I'm quite sure it would be wonderful! If you ever find yourself in Savannah please let me know!
I enjoyed the description of Fairy Sex. I was afraid the clock was malevolent. I’m having trouble keeping track of the various bad witches.
I hope the Minotaur is female, and that slut Mike fucks her. Because that is how Mike has managed most of his monster problems. Ah, heck, I wouldn’t mind if the Minotaur was male, and Mike fucked him! That would be a new direction for this story.
I’ve been reading stories from Literotica for a long time now, and I’ve got to say, this is by far, the best story I’ve read! I usually avoid anything with multiple chapters because of time restraints, but I read the first chapter, and was completely hooked! I love the characters, and the development of each is spectacular, and tastefully done! I like that each person really does have a different personality. Obviously very well thought out. Even the villains are fun to hate lol! I like Cecilia the most, and have no idea why, but Tink is awesome too. I hope that Jenny gets a body if even just to share. I can’t imagine the torture of being stuck in a doll, then have all those things happen. You are a very very talented writer. Thank you for the great stories!
Can't wait to meet another monster and one of my favorites after the centaurs and succubus
You are a great writer! Awesome characters! Awesome story arcs! Keep writing! Maybe find ways to make money off this because it’s that good! Amazon e-novel!
loving the story so far, however im not liking or trusting this librarian so far, strange feelings about wanting to please her and her deception causing everyone problems.
hoping she gets some discipline afterwards, not like BDSM but like yelling at her don't be an underhanded bitch.
It has been a wild ride with Mike and all his compatriates. Today's scene with the fairies was quite naughty. Good work. Fairies are hard to pull a sex scene with.
I am excited for the minotaur. You have been building that one up for like six chapters already. I have a feeling mike is going to be dominated in some cruelly delicious ways.
Wow. I have enjoyed reading the stories on lit for years and never posted a comment until now. In fact, I tried to create an account only to learn that I already had one that is over 10 years old. The reason I wanted to sign up is so I can favorite you so I don't miss the next part. Thank you so much for sharing. It is a wonderful story.
I just read 20 and found I had missed 19. You are writing one of the best stories on literotica and have created a potentially endless framework. Luv it! Kindness always, rule of three.
“Girl, I want t eat your snatch.”
“But I haven’t showered...”
“Girl, I want to taste your LIFE.”
Technically speaking, fairies are just about any of the mythical beings from the pre-christian British Islands, which is why Cecilia is technically also a fairy (specifically a bean sidhe). But based on your description, and the fact that they stated that they aren't pixies (piskie in the original cornish), my guess would be that they are in fact sylphs.
While the idea of her fisting him down the urethra was a little off putting to me, I've enjoyed all the rest of your story.
Even if it is not my kink, the story to too good to just give up on. So please keep on writing.
As always five stars: *****
Always looki forward to what you are going to come up with next!!!
As I write this, I have caught up to your most recent submission -- chapter 30. However, I had to come back and find where you introduced the fairies. This chapter was so funny that I am still smiling about it days later. Congrats to you for what is one of the most memorable sex scenes I have ever read.
Loved it, of course. I've always wondered how Peter and Tink got it on, it's nice to finally know.
I am looking forward to the eventual appearance of a female Leprechaun. Oh, and an Enbarr would be a lovely companion for the Centaur, don't you think? As a shapeshifter surely you'll find a use for a Pooka (Puca). I've been wondering if a Donn Cuailnge might mellow out the Minotaur?
You are and continue to be an incredible author, Thank You!
amyMac
The scenes were crazy!
I'm glad Jenny is back. I hope it works out. I'm really excited to see how everyone turns out.
I'm glad the Geas kicked Kali's @$$!
I'm worried about Dana. I'm glad the clock (which may also be the wardrobe) is trying to help her out. Poor landlady.
On to the next!!!
The fairy fucking scene had me laughing out loud
6stars ******
As stated above, so hot. Love this series, been reading for a long time, love shows like monster musume and think we need more like it. This is amazing, that was the scene I didn't know I needed.
It’s not often I find a series on Lit, where I have to ration my reading. I’m currently on day ten. This is without a doubt one of the best stories I’ve read on here. Thank you for bringing these characters to life and sharing them with us.
And at the risk of saying too much, the scene with Blue? I’ve been looking for that for years! Thank you!
Great story, I've often fantasized about little fairies doing just that...what a treat...5 stars
The only thing that comes to mind is, “holy shit”!
Mike has so many guardians. Thank your for your creativity, genius, determination and execution of a brilliant story. Finn
Great, but I felt like that last fairy scene was a bit too bizzare for my tastes.
Love the story. The flow was jarring after he pulled himself out of the river… he should have been “gasping and exhausted he should have called out to Jenny and Beth and looked back to ensure the Minotaur wasn’t still a threat.” And The fact that these fairies are trapped down here should have given him some pause before helping them escape the labyrinth… the smarter more clever the hero the more readers are hooked. I find that the sci-fi readers are a bit more critical.
Thank you again for your work! Holy shit, that was something. I dunno how much I want to imagine that scenario in my head, good writing as always though lol
Don't like the society
Evil fucks get deleted by tink
That's not a spoiler but a wish
Got a profile just to comment; I'm loving this! The fairies are awesome and adorable, I hope they're recurring characters.
Loved this chapter. Please keep thinking "outside" of the box like with the fairies.
It's like you have a hold of my shirt sleeves and wont let go until I finish. Loving every new twist.
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I generally hate fantasy. Theres always stupid rules "magic comes at a cost", and then you know harry potter is just going to break the rules when he uses the force at no cost because hes got the mojo ring and the ancients foretold he was meant to save the universe with love. To be honest, i'm not sure why I started reading this; But am happy I did. The characters feel like i've met them or would like to - and they feel more than the basic 2 dimensional construct we see in every movie and most tv shows. Right from the first mention of tink - i thought she was adorable and wanted to meet her. So i'm reading about a fairy that stretches her body around a human dick.... and wondering..... in the event of a battle where a villain needs his super soldier serum, could he wrap that fairy on and use her like a condom and prevent juicing up the villain , while getting all the power herself? And laughing as i think that. Thats not my actual question though. I was wondering..... is there a place where you have all of the characters listed for reference? I'm really bad with names. Seriously, like borderline disability I meet people with the same name as me - and seriously can't remember that. And right now i'm going .....lily,.....lily......who the fuck is lily? It took me forever to remember who lily was - and i just started reading this week. I wouldn't mind seeing pictures of the characters too, but yeah, any sort of reference table somewhere?
Urapnes, if you already lost track at chapter 19, you're gonna have to make your own list. There's a LOT more characters getting introduced. As for Lily, she's a succubus and her safe word is chucklebunny.
It’s a four from me. The fairy sex was just too weird but I loved everything else about the chapter ❤️- M Snow
Great story! I've had thoughts about fairy sex that are similar to what you wrote, only my fairies were more human looking and only masturbated my hero.
Fairy fucking sounds like fun! This story just keeps getting better and better, but I'm sure hoping Tink gets rescued soon. I miss her.
Ha! I was sure Blue was going to fire off like a rocket when Mike came. Darn 😋. So much going on. And I had no doubt that we hadn't seen the last of the Minotaur. Once again Beth has gotten fucked without any of the pleasure of getting fucked. And what's with the clock/armoire? Who's behind that. Hopefully he/she will get Dana out of the deep shit she's in. Looking forward to her finally getting her sweet young pussy pounded. Still on the edge of my seat. Oh yeah, and the pixies have given me quite a hard on. May need to do something about that😅.
Faerie Fleshlight.
"FUCKING DIRTY HUMAN" made me laugh out loud. The skill with which you've crafted some of your characters into perverts is delightful. Arabela (idk if I'm spelling her name right) with her human fetish was a really nice touch. The monster people are quite a bit like us after all.
I have a bit of free time and decided to reread the whole series. I had forgotten how damn good this was right from chapter one. Love your writing style and even more your characters. Thank you so much for all the work you done and shared with us. I am not sure if it applies, but Happy Thanksgiving and Happy Holidays
Fairy sex sounds weird, but it must have been enjoyable. I like the action scenes as well.
Sweet dreams (are made of this) and who am I to disagree < Eurythmics >
Your storytelling is spot on. It’s like I am standing right next to Mike and his ladies 😊. Delightful page turning. I love it.
Have a nice day, Annabelle 🥰🙏🌷
Lol... and here I thought blue was going to be launched off him like a rocket when he released inside of her! LoL
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Thank you for this amazing piece of Fantastic fiction, i just love it. I greatly admire your colorful imagination and backround knownledge about mystic creatures if i just see the number of chapters. Thank you again, for publishing. It makes my dark-grey life much more colorful.
Anyone can learn to be a writer, just look at the book shelves at Walmart. Not much worth reading there. However, there are writers with great talent and imagination that draw you into their world. You are one of those writers and I am so happy to have found your work. Thank you.