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Creative!
Lovely piece of art, and insightful, but imho, not a poem.
I have an idea...
Submit an edit with the poem repeated beneath the illustration. It would easier to read. If this illustration was bigger, then I could probably read it more easily. :)
Poetry is. . .
As mentioned in the TYPEDRAWiNG thread on the Poetry Forum, This was really just a first try with the software program, and I posted it so that those who couldn't get the site to work could get an idea of what I was talking about. Syndra Lynn is right, it is more an experiment in combining visual art and words than a finished poem (or drawing). But it shows the basic potential of the concept. - The words used were, "Pages are blank canvas for words" and "Tree essence".
A simple finished version might (as an example) contain the following:
Tree Essence
Trees are the essence
Pages are
just blank
canvas for ink
Words are the essence
Poetry is
>°)))>
Neat!
I've never seen anything like this before. Very nice!!!!
--your pal, the blue squirrel
very nice
I see now! a very unique program indeed.
I will be looking forward to more
and I found the fishing for right words
was part of the excellent experience that
came from the viewing.
I loved it...
...but of course I have this weird thing for trees.
A new world of possibilities!
A 5 for the possibilities in this technique.
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reminds me of the sixties; only not as good
didn't like the enjambment, it is more like enjamment
And I am going out of my way...
to be nice.
vague
An illustration that appears vague and hardly readable. The format, though is highly unusual. Perhaps something experimental going on here.
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An interesting technique with most of the illustration composd of that single phrase repeated.
BLANK VERSE
has no grammar. TK U MLJ LV NV
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