by avaT
Terrible POV writing. Why would any wife leave a husband and her children to be a fuck toy? Risking her health and life in the bargain? She's such an unlikable character
that it was impossible to feel sorry for her. Poorly thought out drivel.
1 star
Who wants to read garbage from a walking STD cum dump???? No score, barely worthy.
What u gonna do when your attractiveness falters? Did the newguy marry u? And u r not a mom-to your kids- why have them?
Its another to have him fuck you all night long and have him there when the kids wake up.
One is a poor wife, the other is a poor wife and mother. Its like you had no emotional ties to anyone but yourself and honestly, that was disgusting.
what was the point?
You know nobody gives a flying fuck.
If you were attempting to create one of the top ten most despicable female characters in LW annals, then congratulations, you have succeeded admirably.
Should be locked into a zoo where she would be able to satisfy her primal instincts with the apes.
So, you have an educated Careerwoman married to a boring, useless husband. Then she leaves him and abandons her kids, and shacks up with a useless biker sex-maniac who just wants to exploit her as his slut and makes her dress like one. Then she starts to planning to fuck his useless biker buddy behind the back of his Girlfriend. This causes me to suspect that the author is very stpid and useless! Just like his/her useless story.
Ah, I see we have the usual perverted detractors passing disparaging remarks. Take a hike you sick people. I'm not trying to win any literary awards. I'm merely telling my story as it was. If you don't like it, leave it and save your caustic remarks for yourselves. I really don't give a shit about your opinions. You are all a bunch of losers getting your perverted kicks from denigrating others. Bye!
Total shit. A waste of time to read. Now I have to take a good shit. Shit this story down the toilet.
Today you gave me pleasure. I enjoyed reading your story. Thank you Ava T. You made an old man happy!
Author broke a bit snippy on the readers, but at least she didn't write anymore of her garbage.
Then calling the readers perverts shows how twisted she is. The husband needs to hire a PI, get evidence of her disgusting lifestyle. Then have the courts prevent her from having the kids anywhere near these lowlife people. She won't care or miss them anyway. They are obviously not a priority to her. When she dies young because of her selfish, unhealthy lifestyle, the kids will barely even notice she's gone. Pathetic.
To call the author a flaming hypocrite would be to vastly understate her derangement. Her sickness is infinitely worse.
But there are those women/girls who were attractive and then there were the unattractive ones who had to "do it" to get male attention. The author is one of the latter.
The author wasn't her lover's type because her lover's type was proper weight and attractive. Hence, her lover being verbally abusive. The lover needed to be abusive to get it up for a fattie.
Putting lingerie on an unattractive female is like gift wrapping a bag of fertilizer. Instead of buying lingerie, STOP EATING 5 pounds of donuts a day. Then maybe your lover will start seeing you as his type