All Comments on 'Vampire Nation'

awesome starter, this story is looking to be indepth and gripping (i love it) my only thing is that when you make red a little bit older can we know more about him? like his likes dislikes his personality whether or not he falls in love. can he sire children (vampire, human or both?) well good writing and hope you continue it

If hundreds of new vampires were made every day, there would be thousands of vampires created every week, and millions created every few years. So how are there only thousands in the world now after all this time? Doesn't make sense.

Having perused several of your stories, I can't help but notice the rampant plagarism/unoriginality of most of your themes. Might want to look for an original thought, particularly one not ripped off of "Blade" meets "Buffy the Vampire Slayer". You've got potential, but this seems a little lazy. Sorry, but it's the truth.

Very interesting way of thinking how "vampires" began. It took a lot of thought to come up with this story. Having read many a vampire book and vampire romance, I am impressed. Looking forward for the next chapter.

I really love this story

It is deep and gripping leaving you to want more

and wonder what did happen. I look forward to read more of this story

This sucks.

Wow! You must be the most prolific writer on this site. I just stumbled upon this entry and really thought it deserved a follow up. Did you continue it in another story? It was a great start! I'd love to read more but you have soo many listings I wouldn't even know where to look.

The vampire nation does not appear to be the problem. This story feel like the humans will be the bad guys. If most of the blood that the vampires drinks are from non fatal human feedings or animals, then hunting vampires is more about hatred of something that is different and more powerful than a human beings.