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NIICCCEEE!!!!!!
awesome starter, this story is looking to be indepth and gripping (i love it) my only thing is that when you make red a little bit older can we know more about him? like his likes dislikes his personality whether or not he falls in love. can he sire children (vampire, human or both?) well good writing and hope you continue it
the msah doesn't add up
If hundreds of new vampires were made every day, there would be thousands of vampires created every week, and millions created every few years. So how are there only thousands in the world now after all this time? Doesn't make sense.
A general note
Having perused several of your stories, I can't help but notice the rampant plagarism/unoriginality of most of your themes. Might want to look for an original thought, particularly one not ripped off of "Blade" meets "Buffy the Vampire Slayer". You've got potential, but this seems a little lazy. Sorry, but it's the truth.
Interesting
Very interesting way of thinking how "vampires" began. It took a lot of thought to come up with this story. Having read many a vampire book and vampire romance, I am impressed. Looking forward for the next chapter.
Looking forward to reading more of this story
I really love this story
It is deep and gripping leaving you to want more
and wonder what did happen. I look forward to read more of this story
Pretty Obvious
This sucks.
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