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fruit of his vine

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by sandspike02/23/05

love the one you know

I got the feeling you drink from this vine often. Love
and sex thats how I read it. Smooth.

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by Anonymous02/23/05

Wow, blue!

This is good.

Syn

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by Bill Dada02/24/05

Give Me That Ol' Time Religion

I agree with Syn, this good. I plan to read more of your work.

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by WickedEve03/01/05

temple cock

cock=temple. That's been done before--a lot. This poem had the potential to suck, but hey blue, it didn't! :) No way. Lots of unique phrases, like loin lullabies, made this a good and interesting read.

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