by Fantasy Kiss
After seeing so much crap on this site, it's nice to finally find something good. Thank you.
You have a talent for saying what many cannot say.
You reach the centre of things in a gentle way and though some words convey lust alone, the love still shines through
After more than 60 years of life you have made me realize that I have missed something pretty special.
It isn't because I haven't tried, because I have.
It isn't because I haven't cared, because I have and I do.
But for all my trying and caring, nobody will miss me in that special way that you miss your lover.
I wonder if he will wake up and realize what he is missing...........Terry
I really enjoyed this poem; was thinking how it 'tugged at me'... right up until the questions at the bottom, and then it sort of lost the flow - lost me. The poem itself is excellent though!
I love it- it puts my own missings at ease, it that makes sense
Amazing, And the beauty is i might be goiing to remember this poem, if i dont end up with someone. Hope i Dont.
Beautifully written! I felt the end deeply, my beautiful girl left me a little over a month ago...OK fine. One month, three days, and five hours ago. The silence is fucking deafening...i'm miserable. Like you, i wonder why, why i wasn't good enough? What did i do wrong, did i love her too much? Why she wouldn't fight for us?!?! :( Being sad SUCKS! :(
Love and Peace to you my dear, thanks for the validation. :)
You are talented... this was beautiful and glorious...
Please write more.