All Comments on 'Ash's New Life Ch. 07-08'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
this better be in the magic no VD world

lets see:

kidnapped

feminized

raped & sodomized

used as a sex slave

sold for unprotected bondage anal prostitution to strangers(this better be in the magic no VD world!)

THEN a little video of hubby cheating will be used for divorce between the conspirators? unrealistic. there was enough to get them BOTH into prison for years and years.

there is better tranny stuff out there, this series is just ugly junk.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Sorry toSay but you killed it.

okay the stories were decent with the best of all the pizza boy, but there is just to much that is fake and could not ever possibly happen to any human and if it did would probally kill them. It started off good but you ruined it in the last chapters. Dido on the fact that there is better stories out there

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
i read all 8 chapters back to back

very good story i like the way u started it off as just a normal night and it ended up all f****d up but then a happy ending good use of imagination hope to read more submissions from you until keep using your kinky imagination anth/antonia xxx

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
i liked it

Very nice story, to the people who said it was to fake........................... IT"S A STTORY!!!

REDRIDER6969114SREDRIDER6969114Sover 15 years ago
I loved it!!!!!!

Great story. I am a submissive crossdresser. I have been with dom. men and women even transsexuals. You nailed it perfectly.The parts of your story i havn't lived i fantisize about.

ButtertongueButtertongueabout 14 years ago
More, More!

Enjoyed the longer, serial story. The abusive stuff isn't particularly appealing to me, but the versatile shemale is very hot.

Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
just right

read them all. great just the right mix.

love to read more like that.

good story, just enough mix to make it very enjoyable

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Your story needed to be changed to be considered a good story.

You said they were Kris and Bob who kidnapped him and then became mommy and daddy in the story. And daddy's friend was also named Bob. You didn't have enough imagination to come up with another name for his friend instead of the name Bob. The story has some really weak parts in it. You need to work on your next story a great deal more before posting it next time.

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