Anonymous Gets Hers

Grrrrrrr8t

I loved it. Anyone who has recevied anonymous negative feedback that has no constructive purpose, other than to run the author down will appreciate this story!!

Catharsis?

Nice job. You know what others suspect. Anonymous wants it! Wants it bad!

Anonymous

Iguess we know how you feel about anonymous feedback. Great story.

annoyamous rather than anonymous

anoynyomous gets a kick in the pants!!! LOL

great babe!
kisses
T

what is chlorofome?

could use some editting
eg: chloroform, not "chlorofome"

This story sucked!

Hehe... couldn't resist. I think this story is every author's wet dream come true. Any chance Keith would be willing to meet one of my "fans" in Texas?

VERY hot!

Thanks. I've enjoyed several of your writings, but never commented until now. Just, thanks.

Wow

Just like other readers, this story enticed me to comment for the first time. You are my absolute favorite author. Your stories spark my imagination in amazing ways. I was so excited when i read your first story, and clicked for more, that you had so many! Please keep writing. Now that ive had a taste of what you can create, i'm dying for more.

NOT a fan of Rape,but THIS was the exception!

In spite of a few understandable (minor) spelling errors, this was well-written smut! I do not usually like RAPE scenarios, but this was presented in such a way that we understood that the lady getting said treatment DESERVED & even desired it! So I am@ peace with the fact that I came enormously during this read! Smack her tits AGAIN. Do it with that giant dong THIS time. LOL Bruise her b!tch-@$$ good. Let her know what it feels like2 B screwed over by a Black. Then have him jam that tool up her butt! Heh Well done,goldie!

liked it, but

i enjoyed the story. a friendly editor could easily fix the odd spelling and grammar slips. perhaps, in exchange for sex!

keep writing!

Nice!

*Resisting the urge to leave loads of negative anonymous feedback... and my home address!*

Wickedly awesome! You are an amazingly talented writer.

~Daisy~

nice writing, not enough build up due to ....

NIce way of writing, flow.

Not enough build up of momentum due to too big jumps into action, to quick give in.

Thx

Could of been a two part story to get more details but love it anyway.

SIZE

2 INCH AROUND DOES NOT SEEN RIGHT.
A FAIR STORY BUT NEEDS A LOT OF EDITING

USE OF POSSESSIVE

"No ones cock is that big."

Should be:

"No one's cock is that big."

Unconventional

I just read your "Unconventional" story and thought I would read this one. It's more off-the-wall than the guy and gal in a closet. A weird form of revenge/punishment for negative comments. However, the switch from revenge to jealously was great and the rape passed into the background and the sex between Nadia and her well-hung black friend was well done. The double ending was also a nice twist.

Not

Sorry! Had some of your other stuff. Mostly your lesbian stories. Thinking this was another one but with the lets get even with a twist . Turns out you went and spoiled the shit out of it with including a. Mandingo!!!😱😢😑 so I'm getting even 2🌟's
This One SUCKED