All Comments on 'Travel Moon'

by Alex De Kok

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My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
travel moon

short and sweet

says a lot with so little.

nice poem Alex

sacksackabout 19 years ago
I like this....

not as corny as it could have been! Good job!

Wanton VixxxenWanton Vixxxenabout 19 years ago
This poem sums it all up...

briefly, but beautifully, Alex. However, I have two Thursday children Myself and there is another take on "Thursday's child has far to go". I have always believed it to mean there is no limit to attainments in life; that the Thursday child's reach is longer than any of the others born of the week and therefore will leave their marks indelibly - ignoring the ticking of that cold, uncaring clock, but still loved, led and lit by your travel moon.

I loved this your take on life, and thank you for sharing it with Me.

Vixxx

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
TO GRASP A MATE

along the traveled trail together. TK U MLJ LV NV

ChucksSiteChucksSiteabout 12 years ago
We All Have Our Own Path Through Life and Yet....

we do not know where that path will lead or whose it will cross, and that is what keeps us moving inexorably down that path toward its end.

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July 13, 2023 - As some of you have no doubt realised, I'm writing again, albeit very slowly. My late wife was a writer as well, although not on Literotica, and I think she would have wanted me to continue. May 24, 2021 - I haven't posted anything for some time now, and it ma...