All Comments on 'The Light of the Golden Afternoon'

So where is the rest!?!?

5!

I loved this beautiful, erotic love story. I hope there is more to tell.

What jsmangis just wrote!

I have to admit when I saw the word golden in the title I immediately thought "golden showers", not my thing at all. But then i read the story and it was beautiful! Thank you for writing a lovely story.

So elegantly written..and yet...it seems so real, so honest, so..perfect. I can't wait to read more.

Beautiful story! Keep it going

One of the greatest submissions to Literotica, deserve a place among the best short tales on this website.

One of the more beautifully erotic stories I’ve encountered in a long time. Hope you have more to share.

So sweet and erotic, it cries out for more.

You've taken an everyday happening and made it a beautiful occasion that will be remembered for several lifetimes, if it were possible. It alone enhanced the story into a very memorabilia event that will encourage readers to re-enact the events herein.

I love the story and the chacters.The setting is also perfect for these friends.

Two words are jarring: susurration and balletic. They do not enhance the read.

Describe the whispering of the brushes. As for balletic, describe her graceful move.

Both descriptions add to the eroticism and build the anticipation.

ps it should have 4 stars but loses one ..see above. Unfortunately I waited too long to complete the 3 stars and it wouldn’t take the 3rd.

The previous guy is mad susurration is the perfect word.

Loved the whole gently erotic thing.

This was the beauty of a simple moment turned into its own piece of art.