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I like
this a lot.
A very common emotion written in a funny but touching way.
Thank you
Very nice, min!
I've liked this from the first read and wondered who wrote it. ~Imp
Silly goose
you say you're not a writer, but that was FAbsulous.
Not crapola at all.
A/J
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I've seen those women
radiant with love.
Walking talking hurricane
lamps casting arcs
of warmth from within.
Bitches.
Favorite stanza.
Not a thing I didn't like. Serious, humorous, kind of a mix. Good work!
Very real
Often with love poems they can be sappy and trite. This was very real and immensly more powerful. You did a great job with a simple theme. The simlicity of it gives it its grace and draw. Interesting spacing and blocking kept it unique. I applaud you for your creativity and effectiveness.
Now that the seemingly clinical portion of this comment is over:
It was damn good! I always enjoy whatever you do. You have a gift and a talent that you should be kind enough to share with us more often. I always treasure what you do. Don't ever stop being you.
Deceptively Simple
The structure, the complexity of emotion, the echo of how so many of us feel when we're freefalling with more emotion that grace…it's all there. Nicely done, min. :)
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Loved it! A fun read- I absolutely identify. I'm not particulary graceful myself, about anything.
Like the author
As gentle as the summer breeze. Soft as a feather. But in its emotion, as powerful as a huricane.
Well done!
Loved it Min -
The minimalist style conveys a perfect truth!
Beautiful
and wondrous, and powerfully evocative. Sometimes we get romance right despite ourselves. Thanks, Min. LJ
LOL
Your words ring true in this poem. How foolish we seem to ourselves and yet, those who love us seem to ignore it and love us more...
~Honey
:)
somehow, dear sweet gosling, I missed this when it was first posted., excellent work, Minsue, loved it :)
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,500 poems.
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