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Meditations Down a Shot-gun Barrel

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by Anonymous

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by My Erotic Tale02/25/05

universal

this poem says alot while not saying it

and an inkling of the fierce balance of the cosmos.

when you can find balance on a ball soaring 66,000 miles an hour thru space, welcome to tranqulity, but watch for the one who will shoot you with a shot gun blast just for looking like you might have a better grasp on life than they

inspiring poem

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by WickedEve03/01/05

some of this is good

like: my colossal, haunting left eye,

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