I've been waiting for quite some time for a UPS delivery man to get it good. Maybe I should share some real life UPS stories that you could write.
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Anonymous02/27/05
Delicious
Very hot and extremely delicious. The sly inuendo at the beginning was very enticing. I was smiling from the moment she put on the kimono. I would have like to seen use of the toy. Perhaps next time there could be more use out of the next order. Very yummy.
Sophia,
Well done! All the right elements in the perfect order. So build up, tension, uncertainty and then abandonment. Wow! Nice! When are you going to write more? ~ Centauri4
Certainly a positive response from my..er...anyway, I love what's there. Possibly it's just my own perverted self, but I would have liked you to have protracted them fucking together. What I really liked was the sense of sexual self-confidence in the main character (I love the 'toy' comment after he came in her mouth). Well done!
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HOT
I've been waiting for quite some time for a UPS delivery man to get it good. Maybe I should share some real life UPS stories that you could write.
Delicious
Very hot and extremely delicious. The sly inuendo at the beginning was very enticing. I was smiling from the moment she put on the kimono. I would have like to seen use of the toy. Perhaps next time there could be more use out of the next order. Very yummy.
Very arousing!
Brilliantly told tale! I will continue to read your work, Bravo! ~Minx
Another Arosal
You are two for two. Lovely story, thanks.
yumm!
great story SJ ... I need to get on my deliveryman uniform and come right over! Well done, cant wait to read more, more!
Made me want to handle my package!
Sophia,
Well done! All the right elements in the perfect order. So build up, tension, uncertainty and then abandonment. Wow! Nice! When are you going to write more? ~ Centauri4
Mmmmmmmm Good
SJ your stories are very arousing, feels like I'm sitting there, waiting for my turn for you to help me with my package.
Wow!!
I will remember this story whenever I see one of those big brown trucks parked near a home! Nicely done!
Great albeit brief
Certainly a positive response from my..er...anyway, I love what's there. Possibly it's just my own perverted self, but I would have liked you to have protracted them fucking together. What I really liked was the sense of sexual self-confidence in the main character (I love the 'toy' comment after he came in her mouth). Well done!
great delivery
Wonderful delivery! (And I've got a package for you, too.)
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