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Glad to see your math class was as boring as mine!
Well written, as is all you do!
Maybe nothing lasts forever but...
This classic poem is still going strong after all these years.
this poem
is mentioned in the new poems reviews.
?
In two places near the beginning of the poem, you use "where" and I think you really mean "were"...
but an interesting read nonetheless.
forever..........
Something lasts forever,
it's the joy or pain
you carry in your soul.
1980????!! Two points - you show high maturity here, despite a few minor weak points, and, - now you're starting off into the prime of your life.
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