A Fine story but it needed a little more proof-reading. Good action and some humor added for good measure.
Though i did wish it was longer...
great story, i would love to be in her place.
Bloody brilliant mate, your average Kiwi guy having fun, keep up the good work
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A Good Story
A Fine story but it needed a little more proof-reading. Good action and some humor added for good measure.
Loved it!
Though i did wish it was longer...
oh, i need my hole filled too
great story, i would love to be in her place.
Good story
Bloody brilliant mate, your average Kiwi guy having fun, keep up the good work
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