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A very
poignant look at love lost.
I can never make the rhymes this smooth..
They work without being too saccharine or cliche'
Nice to see you, as well, on board this morning.
Get well soon
Beautiful!
Wonderful metaphor and soooo good to see you back!
Empty glasses can be filled again
You just need to toast to life and drink from them with another. A metaphorically poignant poem - thank you.
Wow
The empty sadness in this is just devastating. Thank you. LJ
Wonderfully sad, poignantly beautiful
Your prose here is smooth, it flows like the fine wine so sweetly and metaphorically referred to. One can get intoxicated by your poetic genius.
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This is a sad piece, with wine a metaphor for life and love. As life proceeds, the wine is drunk as slowly love runs out. After reading this I scanned the other comments and will only add that poignant seems inadequate a word to describe the feeling here. Me? I'm ready for a refill.
Haunting poignancy
It's a poem so sad, of life's loves consumed and gone with no easy refill.
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